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There Was This Boy...
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Once upon a time,
As generic as any other,
There was this boy
With boy hair
With boy eyes
With boy ish hands
And a bright, white smile
In bright, white undies
And a indescribable jacket
With an indescribable scent
Who gave me indescribable feelings
A heart beating fast,
A face glowing red,
Like my favorite generic pop song
Stuck on repeat
I know you understand the feeling
We all feel
Hold on tight,
Before it gets surreal
As generic as any other,
There was this boy
With boy hair
With boy eyes
With boy ish hands
And a bright, white smile
In bright, white undies
And a indescribable jacket
With an indescribable scent
Who gave me indescribable feelings
A heart beating fast,
A face glowing red,
Like my favorite generic pop song
Stuck on repeat
I know you understand the feeling
We all feel
Hold on tight,
Before it gets surreal
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My teacher criticized me for my vagueness in my writing and for once I actually felt really torn as a writer. In one respect, the criticism is helpful and good natured. In the other, vagueness is my talent and I feel like it creates a special, obtuse flow that suits my voice.
I guess I felt really challenged for once. I want to be obtuse and vague, but I also want to be a good, understood writer. I'm not sure how to deal with this, but to write more vague poetry.
I guess I felt really challenged for once. I want to be obtuse and vague, but I also want to be a good, understood writer. I'm not sure how to deal with this, but to write more vague poetry.
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